I liked that the video had some comedy to it but overall it was serious and conveyed the fact that piracy is a crime. Good use of angles and fourth wall being broken. Good job!
The conclusion of the story is great, it just took a while to get to it. Music works great. There are parts in the video that are shaky and kind of hurts the eye but other than that it was a good video.
The story line was pretty interesting, the effects were done nicely as well. I just think some of the scenes had extra information that you could of left out. Good Job!
The camera shots were good, especially from the webcam of the computer. I liked how you typed out the name of the location to introduce where he was. I think there was a lot of dialogue and it was a little too spelled out though.
It's nine minutes long and yet I still feel like there's things that are missing. The web-creature's character wasn't fleshed out very well and who is Jack, and .....
That Robert guy has a pretty groovy walk.
ReplyDeleteThe idea for the film was great, I only wish it was a bit shorter.
ReplyDeleteI like that the google search bar was utilized for the scene transitions, it helped with the aesthetic you were going for.
ReplyDeleteNice effects. Here and there it seem to drag on a little but good job guys!
ReplyDeleteReally well put together and good acting!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was very comedic and cool use of SPFX
Good camera work between dialogues
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ReplyDeleteI liked that the video had some comedy to it but overall it was serious and conveyed the fact that piracy is a crime. Good use of angles and fourth wall being broken. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThe conclusion of the story is great, it just took a while to get to it. Music works great. There are parts in the video that are shaky and kind of hurts the eye but other than that it was a good video.
ReplyDeletei thought you had some pretty interesting camera angles and i also like how the search bar was used throughout
ReplyDeleteThe story line was pretty interesting, the effects were done nicely as well. I just think some of the scenes had extra information that you could of left out. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteThe camera shots were good, especially from the webcam of the computer. I liked how you typed out the name of the location to introduce where he was. I think there was a lot of dialogue and it was a little too spelled out though.
ReplyDeleteIt's nine minutes long and yet I still feel like there's things that are missing. The web-creature's character wasn't fleshed out very well and who is Jack, and .....
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